The Doll's House
I'm really enjoying this when I can follow it. It's just that I'm getting confused in the storyline. There nothing to tell me where one storyline ends and another one begins. I need a space, a name, a place.... something to tell to shift gears. I feel that eventually the storylines might meet up but now, ah.... I am about ready to pull out my hair. It's frustrating when you're enjoying the story and bam, you're lost and you have to backtrack and find your place again. I even found one paragraph where there was two storylines together. It's hard to thriller s..l..o..w..l..y. I am losing the thrill!
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